Thursday, June 2, 2011

What is the good hook for an essay about how people around you change your life and made you today?

looking for a good hook for this essay

Please, help me !What is the good hook for an essay about how people around you change your life and made you today?
U could start off with a rhetorical question aimed at the reader?

such as Why did i change my life? or Life is hard,don't u think?

a good example is of some drug addicts, who have changed their life because now they have children or domestic violence abusers who were brought up around violence now they abuse their wives or teenagers who have changed because of peer pressure etc...

normally someone changes because they want to improve their life or because of love.

u should use a lot of descriptive words, to keep ur reader intersted....

sorry i'm not sure what to say but i wish u luck with ur essay....i still haven't started my english or history essays yet.

marshalminxtk3 xxx